Decided to make a separate thread for showing off your series.
Basically the same rules apply here with the parody discussion thread. However you're encouraged to post your series and show everyone what you have to offer.
Remember, this thread is for fun, not to just go on a massive tangent explaining in every detail why something isnt to your liking
Xcaliborg wrote:I know Ive already critiqued it but gotta say I like Your Space ghost better.
Also side note. The Avatar kicks schmo! XD
Thanks, I am actually in the process of editing Space Ghost episode 4. I do think that from a technical point, Deadman is better. I also feel like it has more potential for future episodes than my Space Ghost does.
It's still pretty good, man! I esp. loved Sydney's parts as Kyon's little sister ("Hey, guys! Onii-chan says we should take candy from strangers. Isn't he FUCKING HILARIOUS??").
Another one that stuck in my mind: "I'm only choking you to death, so go back to sleep!" The Itsuki-acting-sorta-gay-but-supposedly-not-really shit was awesome, too, like giving Kyon "mouth-to-mouth" for a sprained ankle!
SSDrWh0 wrote:Youtube video for "Guilty Crown Abridged-Episode 1"
Spoiler:
I don't really do Reviews/Critiques, but I figured I could at the very least respond since I like Guilty Crown. (If you want people to do a Review on it, I'd suggest posting it in the "Review/Critiques & Advice" forum. I'd be willing to write a review on it. (shocking, I know)) But in short, I found it... OK. There are definitely places to improve and overall it felt kind of rushed, but I can't go into detail or Xcaliborg will get mad at me. >.>
(As for "Not Another Abridged Series-Episode 4", I refuse to watch/say anything about it because I haven't seen the previous 3 episodes and I think it's unfair to judge it based on one episode with out seeing how it's progressed over time.)
Finally, someone created this thread! Anyway, instead of abridging anime, I wanted to do something different. Something original. Something...crazy. Based of an idea by smashkingabridged, I decided to abridged a Brawl machinima series by banjokazooieplush called "Knights of Brawl".
The story follows the adventures of the titular characters; Link, Kirby, and Meta Knight. It's the most unoriginal and copypasta'd machinima ever made, completely ripping off ideas from other Brawl machinima (Wolf's Retarded Mission, Smashtasm, etc.).
To be honest, this is my 2nd attempt trying to do an abridged series (I did a Hayate TCB one-shot in 2010 and a sequel the following year, which were removed due to the usual crap). I was still trying to figure out what kind of show it's supposed to be; a fast-paced, completely random, comedy or something completely different. Not to mention, the voice acting is bad. I'm not popular enough to hold auditions and I didn't want to use voice changing software.
Some criticism and advice would REALLY be helpful!
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