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    Post by Xcaliborg Tue Aug 21, 2012 12:31 pm

    Decided to make a separate thread for showing off your series.

    Basically the same rules apply here with the parody discussion thread. However you're encouraged to post your series and show everyone what you have to offer.

    Remember, this thread is for fun, not to just go on a massive tangent explaining in every detail why something isnt to your liking
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    Post by TheHawk Tue Aug 21, 2012 12:50 pm

    Eh, I'll jump in first and give it a shot.

    This is my most recent video

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    Post by Xcaliborg Tue Aug 21, 2012 12:53 pm

    I know Ive already critiqued it but gotta say I like Your Space ghost better.

    Also side note. The Avatar kicks schmo! XD
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    Post by TheHawk Tue Aug 21, 2012 12:56 pm

    Xcaliborg wrote:I know Ive already critiqued it but gotta say I like Your Space ghost better.

    Also side note. The Avatar kicks schmo! XD

    Thanks, I am actually in the process of editing Space Ghost episode 4.
    I do think that from a technical point, Deadman is better. I also feel like it has more potential for future episodes than my Space Ghost does.

    Though I still like my Space Ghost too
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    Post by Piclone Tue Aug 21, 2012 1:33 pm

    This is the latest video I've made (probably not as good as the previous ones but who cares Wink)
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    Post by MovesLikeJagger Tue Aug 21, 2012 1:49 pm

    It's still pretty good, man! I esp. loved Sydney's parts as Kyon's little sister ("Hey, guys! Onii-chan says we should take candy from strangers. Isn't he FUCKING HILARIOUS??"). Laughing

    Another one that stuck in my mind: "I'm only choking you to death, so go back to sleep!"
    The Itsuki-acting-sorta-gay-but-supposedly-not-really shit was awesome, too, like giving Kyon "mouth-to-mouth" for a sprained ankle!
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    Post by Mastervoicexd Tue Aug 21, 2012 1:58 pm

    Well here's mines The voice for Calumon is the best of the bunch Razz

    Episode 2 will be out Twisted Evil VERY SOOOON Twisted Evil
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    Post by AnimeLawyers (QuizGuru) Tue Aug 21, 2012 2:09 pm



    The newest and so far best episode we have at AnimeLawyers. Hoping to improve even further.
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    Post by maddogg91 Tue Aug 21, 2012 2:16 pm

    Here's Tales of the Abridged Episode 5, the most recent episode




    And a Preview of 6

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    Post by Jpace92 Tue Aug 21, 2012 2:21 pm

    My 6 month old installment of Burst Angel Abridged. I'm currently waiting on lines for the next one. Hope you guys enjoy it!

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    Post by MovesLikeJagger Tue Aug 21, 2012 7:28 pm

    Mastervoicexd wrote:
    Well here's mines The voice for Calumon is the best of the bunch Razz

    Episode 2 will be out Twisted Evil VERY SOOOON Twisted Evil
    Yay!

    Another hilarious video! lol!
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    Post by maddogg91 Tue Aug 21, 2012 8:58 pm

    And I just finished Episode 6

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    Post by DEEsidia97 Tue Aug 21, 2012 10:26 pm

    This is my latest and my best work. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JS8fszdqQF8

    The latest projects I'm working on is Episode 3 of Dee.Gray-Man and Episode 1 of Katekyo Hitman Rebridged.
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    Post by mattroks101 Wed Aug 22, 2012 6:30 am

    I made this at one time


    Feel free to judge me.
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    Post by Xcaliborg Wed Aug 22, 2012 8:17 am

    Awesome, Its good to see everyone showing their work off~ I've seen most of these already so I cant really say much about them.

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    Post by Chommper17 Wed Aug 22, 2012 8:46 am

    Piclone wrote:This is the latest video I've made (probably not as good as the previous ones but who cares Wink)
    "You're making it sound gay Kyon, Don't make it sound gay....Because it's not." I loved that
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    Post by Mastervoicexd Wed Aug 22, 2012 9:16 am

    As promised Episode 2 of Arbridgimon tamers is up


    please leave a comment on the video to tell me what you think
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    Post by MovesLikeJagger Wed Aug 22, 2012 1:35 pm

    "Does a boy wear a skirt??Evil or Very Mad"
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    Post by Admin-sensei Wed Aug 22, 2012 2:23 pm

    SSDrWh0 wrote:Youtube video for "Guilty Crown Abridged-Episode 1"
    Spoiler:

    I don't really do Reviews/Critiques, but I figured I could at the very least respond since I like Guilty Crown. (If you want people to do a Review on it, I'd suggest posting it in the "Review/Critiques & Advice" forum. I'd be willing to write a review on it. (shocking, I know)) But in short, I found it... OK. There are definitely places to improve and overall it felt kind of rushed, but I can't go into detail or Xcaliborg will get mad at me. >.>

    (As for "Not Another Abridged Series-Episode 4", I refuse to watch/say anything about it because I haven't seen the previous 3 episodes and I think it's unfair to judge it based on one episode with out seeing how it's progressed over time.)
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    Post by ghostfreak3012 Wed Aug 22, 2012 5:07 pm

    MovesLikeJagger wrote:"Does a boy wear a skirt??Evil or Very Mad"
    so what if i do Sad
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    Post by Xcaliborg Wed Aug 22, 2012 9:19 pm

    Admin-sensei wrote:
    SSDrWh0 wrote:Youtube video for "Guilty Crown Abridged-Episode 1"
    Spoiler:

    Xcaliborg will get mad at me. >.>


    Dahhh~ I'm sure I'd let it slide, just not like

    FROM HERE---































    ---- TO HERE. Worth of words
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    Post by KaggyVA Thu Aug 23, 2012 11:01 am

    Well, this is the trailer I made for an Abridged series I'm making. The series is actually funny, not like dis crap.




    this also like... my fourth, maybe fifth abridged. So I'm still fairly new at this!

    Also, thinking about not calling Air Gear Abridged (Cause that's boring) But give it a stupid name. If anyone has thoughts help me out please!
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    Post by MovesLikeJagger Thu Aug 23, 2012 6:18 pm

    ghostfreak3012 wrote:
    MovesLikeJagger wrote:"Does a boy wear a skirt??Evil or Very Mad"
    so what if i do Sad
    Wink No worries, man! I'm not one to judge.
    I guess you haven't watched SSDrWh0's "Another" abridgement? Razz
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    Post by Speedy149KidKira Fri Aug 24, 2012 12:52 am



    Finally, someone created this thread! Anyway, instead of abridging anime, I wanted to do something different. Something original. Something...crazy. Based of an idea by smashkingabridged, I decided to abridged a Brawl machinima series by banjokazooieplush called "Knights of Brawl".

    The story follows the adventures of the titular characters; Link, Kirby, and Meta Knight. It's the most unoriginal and copypasta'd machinima ever made, completely ripping off ideas from other Brawl machinima (Wolf's Retarded Mission, Smashtasm, etc.).

    To be honest, this is my 2nd attempt trying to do an abridged series (I did a Hayate TCB one-shot in 2010 and a sequel the following year, which were removed due to the usual crap). I was still trying to figure out what kind of show it's supposed to be; a fast-paced, completely random, comedy or something completely different. Not to mention, the voice acting is bad. I'm not popular enough to hold auditions and I didn't want to use voice changing software.

    Some criticism and advice would REALLY be helpful!


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