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    Post by FlamingGuitarVA Mon Aug 20, 2012 2:57 am

    First topic message reminder :

    Throw out new ideas that you'd think would be kinda funny in an Abridged Series!
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    Post by JeremyMakesMahToast Mon Aug 20, 2012 8:12 pm

    ryou419 wrote:the thing is my voice is way to deep to imitate a girls voice, and the series we were planning to do was either Vampire Knight or Aoi No Exorcist.... so, irony is now at play.
    What could work is opening your mouth wide when you try to do a girl's voice, something I've noticed about my self is that the wider I open my mouth the higher I can get my voice. the more closed my mouth is the deeper it will get.

    cause Ik how it is man I have a smexeh man voice to, but you gotta play with your voice you'd be surprised by what comes out.

    But I don't know what your trying to do with the character so that might not be the best idea

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    Post by Xcaliborg Mon Aug 20, 2012 9:46 pm

    Lavaros wrote:I don't think anyone has done YuGiOh yet.

    But in all seriousness, I think anything can be made funny, it just depends on skill level. Though I don't really much see the point in doing shows like Ouran, but that just might be me.

    I am hoping to see a parody of Ao No Exorcist, as I haven't found or been linked to one yet.



    I did one once. However the other guy behind the series and I aren't really mates anymore...
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    Post by ZeroSigner Mon Aug 20, 2012 11:50 pm

    Xcaliborg wrote:
    Lavaros wrote:I don't think anyone has done YuGiOh yet.

    But in all seriousness, I think anything can be made funny, it just depends on skill level. Though I don't really much see the point in doing shows like Ouran, but that just might be me.

    I am hoping to see a parody of Ao No Exorcist, as I haven't found or been linked to one yet.



    I did one once. However the other guy behind the series and I aren't really mates anymore...

    I Try to stay away from that anime to parody cause if i did that then im setting myself as " That guy who rip off well know abridgers" this is why i try to be original lol
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    Post by Abrudging101 Mon Aug 20, 2012 11:55 pm

    ZeroSigner wrote:
    Xcaliborg wrote:
    Lavaros wrote:I don't think anyone has done YuGiOh yet.

    But in all seriousness, I think anything can be made funny, it just depends on skill level. Though I don't really much see the point in doing shows like Ouran, but that just might be me.

    I am hoping to see a parody of Ao No Exorcist, as I haven't found or been linked to one yet.



    I did one once. However the other guy behind the series and I aren't really mates anymore...

    I Try to stay away from that anime to parody cause if i did that then im setting myself as " That guy who rip off well know abridgers" this is why i try to be original lol

    I don't mean to sound harsh, but this was perfect in every way and nothing will ever compare. I think I'm just done watching videos because I know I'll never see something this good again, not even from its creator. That being said, I'll actually watch the video tomorrow, when I have more time.
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    Post by AtticusTheAbridged Mon Aug 20, 2012 11:56 pm

    Mr. Rogers always told me that if I just be myself eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeverybody will love me.
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    Post by Abrudging101 Tue Aug 21, 2012 12:00 am

    AtticusTheAbridged wrote:Mr. Rogers always told me that if I just be myself eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeverybody will love me.

    Atticus? Are you the same Atticus from To Kill a Mockingbird?
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    Post by totoyamado Tue Aug 21, 2012 1:28 am

    i've always thought it'd be hilarious to throw a character into a series that always references disney song titles without meaning to
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    Post by Lavaros Tue Aug 21, 2012 3:34 am

    Apparently references are supposed to be a bad thing. No matter what.
    I say screw that I want references.
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    Post by John.38. Tue Aug 21, 2012 3:35 am

    Lavaros wrote:Apparently references are supposed to be a bad thing. No matter what.
    I say screw that I want references.

    Depends on your audience and what type of reference it was. No one is going to get it if I kept throwing Willie Denton jokes around.
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    Post by DarkWindu7 Tue Aug 21, 2012 5:27 am

    references are ok but using them for ever funny line kind of makes the audiance have that haha i know where thats from moment in their head and too much of that gets boring
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    Post by FruitCupkun Tue Aug 21, 2012 6:20 am

    DarkWindu7 wrote:references are ok but using them for ever funny line kind of makes the audiance have that haha i know where thats from moment in their head and too much of that gets boring

    I agree with this point especially. Back when I was asking some friends for advice on abridging, he said, "Put a ton of references in." But, the comedy needs to stay fresh. I can only make so much gagging noises on Saki before it gets old.
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    Post by TraceBASS Tue Aug 21, 2012 6:39 am

    Right now, I'm writing a script for an abridgement of Spirited Away.
    I'm planning to use mostly Australian themes, voices in characters and such, because there isn't goddamn enough of our culture on YouTube (apart from heavyset kids responding to bullying LIKE A BOSS~). Still unsure if there will be any slightly racist jokes or not; I'm not out to offend, merely to entertain. And yes, there will be bogans. And wogs. Fully sick, braaa~
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    Post by Zan Tue Aug 21, 2012 6:46 am

    Out of all, I think motivation is also a big part. Without it you wont go anywhere.

    I've seen many abridged series where they go 1 or 2 episodes then they give up or go on a infinite hiatus.
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    Post by John.38. Tue Aug 21, 2012 6:49 am

    Zan wrote:Out of all, I think motivation is also a big part. Without it you wont go anywhere.

    I've seen many abridged series where they go 1 or 2 episodes then they give up or go on a infinite hiatus.

    We were going to meet the same fate, but you pushed the project. It was smooth sailing after you picked me up, other then fining new VA's for everyone but Khota and Takashi from that point.
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    Post by Zan Tue Aug 21, 2012 7:09 am



    Either that or be another failed project.
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    Post by MasterWGS Tue Aug 21, 2012 9:43 am

    Okay, so I'm writing this script, and it's not very funny. In fact, after rereading it, I don't think it's funny at all.

    I don't want specific joke recommendations, just advice -

    How do I actually get funnier?

    (Serious question, by the way.)
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    Post by Angelxemoxgir Tue Aug 21, 2012 10:56 am

    How about Casshern Sins. That seems it would be funny. especially if freinder had a radio typed voice like bumble bee
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    Post by Kuu Tue Aug 21, 2012 11:16 am

    Zan wrote:Out of all, I think motivation is also a big part. Without it you wont go anywhere.

    I've seen many abridged series where they go 1 or 2 episodes then they give up or go on a infinite hiatus.

    *cough* UH... Who would do such a thing? SURELY NOT ME.
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    Post by Admin-sensei Tue Aug 21, 2012 11:23 am

    Kuu wrote:
    Zan wrote:Out of all, I think motivation is also a big part. Without it you wont go anywhere.

    I've seen many abridged series where they go 1 or 2 episodes then they give up or go on a infinite hiatus.

    *cough* UH... Who would do such a thing? SURELY NOT ME.

    Of course... you would NEVER do something like that, right?
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    Post by Kuu Tue Aug 21, 2012 11:26 am

    Admin-sensei wrote:
    Kuu wrote:
    Zan wrote:Out of all, I think motivation is also a big part. Without it you wont go anywhere.

    I've seen many abridged series where they go 1 or 2 episodes then they give up or go on a infinite hiatus.

    *cough* UH... Who would do such a thing? SURELY NOT ME.

    Of course... you would NEVER do something like that, right?

    STOP ACCUSING ME, MAN.
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    Post by Xcaliborg Tue Aug 21, 2012 11:37 am

    Kuu wrote:
    Admin-sensei wrote:
    Kuu wrote:
    Zan wrote:Out of all, I think motivation is also a big part. Without it you wont go anywhere.

    I've seen many abridged series where they go 1 or 2 episodes then they give up or go on a infinite hiatus.

    *cough* UH... Who would do such a thing? SURELY NOT ME.

    Of course... you would NEVER do something like that, right?

    STOP ACCUSING ME, MAN.

    Been there, done that!
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    Post by Shooter2435 Tue Aug 21, 2012 11:38 am

    Do the unexpected! have a guy go up to a girl, he says "hey" and she says "hey" but in a super manly voice! and as creeped out as he is he still thinks "I'm gonna marry her someday"
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    Post by ZeroSigner Tue Aug 21, 2012 11:57 am

    Xcaliborg wrote:
    Kuu wrote:
    Admin-sensei wrote:
    Kuu wrote:
    Zan wrote:Out of all, I think motivation is also a big part. Without it you wont go anywhere.

    I've seen many abridged series where they go 1 or 2 episodes then they give up or go on a infinite hiatus.

    *cough* UH... Who would do such a thing? SURELY NOT ME.

    Of course... you would NEVER do something like that, right?

    STOP ACCUSING ME, MAN.

    Been there, done that!
    It was Soooo yesterday!
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    Post by Admin-sensei Tue Aug 21, 2012 1:34 pm

    Kuu wrote:
    Admin-sensei wrote:
    Kuu wrote:
    Zan wrote:Out of all, I think motivation is also a big part. Without it you wont go anywhere.

    I've seen many abridged series where they go 1 or 2 episodes then they give up or go on a infinite hiatus.

    *cough* UH... Who would do such a thing? SURELY NOT ME.

    Of course... you would NEVER do something like that, right?

    STOP ACCUSING ME, MAN.

    I didn't accuse you of anything. That's why I said "NEVER" right? Wow, put a little formatting on some text and this is what happens? TT^TT
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    Post by TraceBASS Tue Aug 21, 2012 5:38 pm

    Here's an interesting one:

    Swap the voices of the male and female characters.
    i.e. Have female VAs voicing male characters, in typically feminine voices, and vice versa. Really mess with people's minds, maybe even throw in an underlying social commentary or something (e.g. maybe make the audience think "How is my opinion different on these characters because they sound like the other gender? Do I respect them more/less?")
    ...High school has ruined me. ._.

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